1)Are there any awkward sentences? 2)Do I explore the arguments of all three sides adequately? 3)Did I properly cite my sources in my paper? 4)Does anyhting need clarification or futher development?
I think you could manage to cite your sources better. Make sure you make it clear that those against smoking bans are worried about revenue. Do the smoking bans in other countries have exceptions in places such as hookah bars? Or is the whole country or city smoke free? You may need to work better to clarify your three points.
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I think you could manage to cite your sources better. Make sure you make it clear that those against smoking bans are worried about revenue. Do the smoking bans in other countries have exceptions in places such as hookah bars? Or is the whole country or city smoke free? You may need to work better to clarify your three points.
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